free Write: what if.....

what if i was a singer and was rich. If i was a singer then i would practice everyday. If i was rich i would first buy my parents a house. then i would get my family out philly. If had a boyfriend i would then he would get know(insider). I would went to sing at they B.E.T awards and all the other awards like beyonce . She my second idol and lauren would be my god mom and could meet lil wayne and he could my play brother. also if i was rich I would help people that are not on there feet right. If i was a singer could be something and set a good example for young children. I would feed the african people so they can get some on there bones and survive.I would just want to be a good person with my money and not be fake. I love to sing so that is why I said what if I was a singer and i was rich.

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